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Bathroom Stall by ~Nefex:iconNefex:



Seething in the closest stall
to Susy supper down an all
and up again. Confiding all
I'd burst the air with drill bit
sonic waves of anger, frustration.
I'm building up a hate for you, while
Susy's reenacting what I think of you.
I'm tempted to pummel this soapbox
sound stage, but actions left disjointed-- cross
Create empathy un-used, sanity bemused
Cursing you for all you are, this place,
this act, this need to fight back grappled with
I shouldn't be holding back any longer still
So blood clings to jackets and soaks in brown
You'll cling to conscious and sink to the ground
I'll stand loose from the bathroom rant, a sycophant  
to orders of an ordered society. No longer.
Mused in my cortex, like a vortex prison,
was this place, so it therefore became much the same
as opinon suggested and only strengthening detest
feelings for you, I play out in the girl's room down the way
Courting the idea of court for the things I'd do to you.
Fighting the fight of a poor teen so blue. Hatred brimming
For your taste, a boil and a burn, scorching your mouth in return
for the life you've paraded me through, if only it was more realistic
to hate you.
©2009 ~Nefex
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This is a fantastic piece!
I like how the lines don't always match up and run into each other. It shows the confusion very well.

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